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Free on Amazon: The Origami Dragon and Other Tales and Wish by C.H. Aalberry

It’s no secret that I enjoy the writing of C. H Aalberry. You can read my review of his YA fantasy novel Wish here.  Now is a brilliant time to download Wish or his wonderful book of short stories The Origami Dragon and Other Tales – they are currently absolutely free on Kindle! Origami

WishThe Origami Dragon is really rather special- darker than Wish in some ways, the intelligent mix of compelling characterisation, fantasy and science fiction is original and engaging. From tiny elephants to inter-stellar travel, the collection has surprising twists and charming moments. The author has a gift for intriguing anti-heroes and bringing the dark and fantastical to life. There’s also a clever intertwining intertextuality throughout.

Get yourself some quality, entertaining literature while it’s free! Also,  look out for stunning use of spelling, grammar and punctuation in both. Come for the plot, stay for the syntax!

Read another review of Wish from the estimable Adam P Reviews. His overview is simply excellent!

Read C. H Aalberry’s advice for writers struggling with writer’s block.

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The Heavenly Road Trip by Fiona Linday

The HeavenlyThis collection of young adult short stories is engaging, spanning varying social and cultural issues. The first concerns a girl escaping from potential trafficking. I particularly like the style of the beginning; short sentences and fragments reflect almost a stream of consciousness. This gives way to a more traditional narrative style in parts of the story. The weather is used for effect charmingly: ‘The sun excited the whole hillside until the flowers, the trees, the bushes and the grass, all burst into colour.’ The first person narrative is insistently present with an almost visual pattern in the continual use of ‘I’. This creates an urgency which draws the reader into the character’s very present danger.

The second story adopts the perspective of a teenager training for the Paralympics. The author uses voice credibly; the character feels relate-able and genuine. This story is particularly impressive for its shifting focus and the way it presents a rounded view of the character and her concerns. The brevity of the paragraphing here intelligently reflects her young character’s thoughts.

The other two stories are futuristic with biblical themes. Both used imagery strongly and would interest some readers. The use of diary form in ‘Meg’s Diary’ is interesting and gives a certain pace and intrigue. Fiona Linday is clearly adept at writing in varied styles and knows the craft well. The mix of genres in this collection means there are aspects that will appeal to all.

Thanks to Fiona Linday for sending me a copy to review. Find out more here.

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